My family story
So it is the day before the new year and we are heading to a
park. We had dinner when we got there. Dinner was a really
tasty BBQ, we had chips, sausages, prawn kebabs and burgers
yum!. After dinner we had play time.
The first game we played was tag then we played other games
that I did not count. At some point someone called out desert
and most of the kids went for desert, which was jelly, ice-cream
and cake. The adults talked so long they missed midnight and
talked till one in the morning, at that point we were exhausted
so we started heading to bed.
The next morning we got up from bed at 10:47 and started with
breakfast. Some adult started coffee brewing and it smelled!
After breakfast everyone started to go home.
Hi Aron from paroa school,my name is Cyris from Ahipara school I read your story About your familiars story and it sounded fun.
ReplyDeleteBut you could work on grammar but it was fun and good job.