Water wastage
In the world there is a certain amount of water each little patcall of water is
involved in the water cycle some little bits float out into space but not very
much 75% of the world is water that is a lot but there is a big problem with
the water in the world the water has something in the water that we like to
call water wastage it plots the water and makes the water unhealthy so they
can't drink the water. The solution was to take the water from the sea and d
salt it saw the people had something to drink.
Hi Rianna im Roscoe from Ahipara School and I like your writing about your
ReplyDeletewater wastage this looks great but maybe next time add punctuation
nice job from Roscoe
Kia Ora Rianna,
ReplyDeleteI am Shriya from Edmund Hillary School. Great job on your writing. Maybe next time you could go back and look if you have any mistakes such as when you said "from the sea and d" but anyway great job. Keep up the good work.
-Shriya from EHS Rm11
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ReplyDeleteNice job about your water wastage.
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