Malo Dion, My name is Ema From Edmund Hillary School. I liked how you set up an emotion for "Dob The Builder", it was very interesting. But I saw some mistakes but in my opinion I would say this story is excellent. I like how you added a picture for an example so everyone knows what you mean, I think that was a smart idea. This story has lots of positivity which is what I really like. Thank you for sharing your work on your school blog. Kai pai.
Hi Rianna I really like your story slide. It's neat how you have added some images. Keep up the good work. From Harmony at Ahipara School.
ReplyDeleteHi Dion your story is interesting with Dob the builder. keep up the great work. Ka Pai from Kavelle Ahipara School.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Dioni really like this story Dob the builder it is very creative keep up the good work kind regards Azaria
ReplyDeleteMalo Dion,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Ema From Edmund Hillary School. I liked how you set up an emotion for "Dob The Builder", it was very interesting. But I saw some mistakes but in my opinion I would say this story is excellent.
I like how you added a picture for an example so everyone knows what you mean, I think that was a smart idea. This story has lots of positivity which is what I really like.
Thank you for sharing your work on your school blog. Kai pai.